Secrets

This poem contains some aspects of sound symbolism. The letter 's' is repeated quite often and the name of the poem is 'secrets', thus this particular letter can give the effect of whisper.

My silent secrets are still breathing 

Though the stories are forgotten,

Once, I wanted you to hear me,

But today I am deaf and silent.

There is no louder voice existing,

That calls your name with screaming passion,

Every spring demands to sing you,

Every star wants to shine you brighter.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Those silent secrets all need a voice.....
You’ve penned this beautifully :)

[Maria]

unfortunately they will remain silent...

[Voice]

"My silent secrets are still breathing

Though the stories are forgotten."

Awesome!

[Maria]

:*;* thanks

[Voice]

You're welcome :)

[BlackPrince]

This poem is short, powerful and sweet.
It's a diamond of a poem for its multi-faceted enlightening effect,
packed with such wonderful imagery, personification and metaphor.

'My secrets are still breathing.'

What a wonderful line!

WELL DONE

[The Twin Arenas]

"Every spring demands to sing you."

Nice line.

[Maria]

Thank youu **

[Maria]

Richard.. as always your comments make me feel even special..thank you

[Richard🖌]

You're so very welcome, Maria … you are special. : )

I think your above comments and this belong under My review … LOL!

[Richard🖌]

Beautiful, soft, whispering sibilance, Maria, to sweep one's senses so sweetly into your moment, into you in such a smoothly flowing pleasure.
Your words scream with the yearning voice of passion and allure that lasts long after the reading is over.

Love it … a big hug to thank you, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard ; )