The Last EveningA Poem by Poet PittinixMore blues, please.The last evening I spent with Heather,
I felt lost and uneasy. Something was weighing on my mind,
but I said nothing about it. I looked into her eyes, and I did
not understand what I saw. She easily sensed my uneasiness
and asked me what was wrong. And she knew that I lied when I
said, “Nothing, I’m okay.” She never told me that she loved
me, but I felt her love. Even though I wanted to hear
those words from her, My pride would not let me ask her
about her feelings for me. Wherever she was, that was where
I wanted to be. Her comforting arms and her
kisses were good enough for me. We went against the traditional
rules, but it did not matter. I had never found happiness with
any woman except Heather, And neither had she ever been
happy with any man except me. So we decided what was right and
what was wrong. We made our own rules of love, but
destiny had a plan for us. I had a strange feeling when I
left her house that evening, But I did not know that I would
never see her again. I thought someday we would work things
out between us. Moreover, I believed that our
love could stand the test of time. To break up with her on the phone
was not what I wanted. Oh how I wished she had eternal
love in her heart. The ardency of my love alone
could not keep us together. In the night, our heaven
mysteriously disappeared. Destiny took her from me, but it couldn’t
take away my love for her. I loved her then, I love her now,
and I will go on loving her. © 2026 Poet PittinixAuthor's Note
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Added on January 3, 2026 Last Updated on January 3, 2026 AuthorPoet PittinixKingston, West Indies, JamaicaAboutHi everyone, I'm an author from Jamaica. I write poems, songs, and short stories. Do not send me any private messages. I came here to read poems and stories and to publish my compositions, not to e.. more.. |

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