Ice Cold

You gave me

The coldest triggering feeling

I've ever felt

In the chest.

Realizing we're almost close

But did not have the rest.

I'm sorry for just being good

And not being at my best.

You like her, don't you?

She must have been blessed.

Reviews

[BluRaven aka Bootsy]

damn, i feel that way lots of times. i truely love it . u make sumn so short mean much more than what some of us see. and thats what i need to do, or learn to do. i do good when i take sumn and make a whole new deal out of it. this is a definate like

[Distant horizons]

Wonderful. Sad, yet honest heartfelt words that it soul probably have taken me at least 5 verses to convey.