Pinch in the Heart

Pinch in the Heart

A Poem by Maroon Surreal

Assumptions usually turn

Into frustrations.

More painful

When feelings are regarded.

They are little

But painful pinches in the heart.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal


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A consummate example of misspent time, assumptions. Pinches sting intensely. Moreso with matters of the heart. Nice pen.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real and true. We all feel those little pinches sometimes. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. So descriptive in so few words. Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on February 13, 2012
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Maroon Surreal
Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..