Mama's skirt with cherries

constructive criticism always welcome

Wrapped,

then unwrapped,

her skirt with cherries

is mapping the ground.

The walls are made of sound

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

through the hollow painting stand:

White feet,

the white on the sheet

and the unborn that

she carries

after the kick, the push, the slap...

Reviews

[Circe]

I missed your words so much, hope inspiration has been good to you. This piece feels abstract made up of a collage of memories and impressions ... there is something so fresh about skirt with cherries... mapping the ground... a sensory portrayal, it seems to pour a shade over the earth.. the whiteness says so much about newness... the unborn and the pending.. yes that slap.. welcome to existence, the first celebratory hurt.... you do this so naturally.

[Marri]

Thank you, so much! Inspiration has been good but kept me away from the computer too long. As always you wrap up my writing with unique interprations and beautiful thoughts. These days this has been especially necessary as the coldness makes us feel a little naked and we are starved for human warmth!

[Circe]

Hahhaha there is plenty of warmth to be had here, positively steaming on the beaches! I'll be sending some hot auras your way! :)

[Marri]

and in return: white winter flowers as a thank you!

[Ken Simm.]

Your writes are very visual. They tack the words with the images so well. As if they had always been connected. That takes some skill.

[Marri]

Thank you. I would never make pretence to have skill in writing, but heart, yes, I aspire to write things not with technique necesseserily, but with passion...

[FJ Davis]

Your intriguing perspective pointed towards a nifty wrap-up.
Very nicely done, Marri!

[Marri]

haha, thank you! Cheeky clever choice to say you like it! I appreciate it :)

[Sami Khalil]

The walls are made of sound
through the hollow painting stand. Nice write.

[Marri]

thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.