A setting sun

Haiku

A setting sun cries
Crimson tears fall through grey clouds
Dying embers fade

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

What a great haiku! I don't think I've read any of your work before, so I'll surely be paying attention to future pieces by you.

[Mars Bear]

Thank you. That's very kind.

[Valentine]

I also paint and could almost see the setting sun in your write. Valentine

[Mars Bear]

Thank you so much. Always hope to paint a picture with words.

[Neville]

Write on..................................................N

[Mars Bear]

Thanks Neville.