A Dreamy Feeling

A Dreamy feeling 

In the sky, I see something blue,

Not like us, neither me.

It was butterflies flying around,

Like cars around town.

Oh, it's a dreamy feeling,

It is always healing!

I see magical trees at night,

It's not normal neither right.

I never expected something bright,

It was a firefly like a light.

Oh, it's a dreamy feeling,

Never like a plane which is wildly wheeling.

There was a streetlamp shining around,

Not normal, it wasn't a town!

There was a random bench sitting there,

I hope nothing comes like a hungry bear!

Oh, it's a dreamy feeling,

I am not dealing.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This is quite lovely Martiya. Dreamy imagery. Butterflies and fireflies work for me. Enjoyed your stanzas.

Chris

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Chris, dreams are the best when you imagine the impossible

[Dylan Macadham]

A magical colorful glimpse-trip into your dreamy feeling :)
...I think you are having a dream about dreaming!😃

[Martiya Daman]

Exactly! Thanks for the review, Dylan.

[Dylan Macadham]

.........😊

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

fantastic! i loved all the imagery and similies. it was surreal, and... dreamy. 'I see magical trees at night,' this line stuck out to me. there's something different about a tree at night. you could see the same tree during the day, but in the darkness it looks almost like a different phenomenon. it was a memorable piece of writing.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Ern!

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

I absolutely love this poem!!! Amazing work Martiya!!!

[Martiya Daman]

Thank Efxaris! Merry Christmas!

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

Merry Christmas!!!