The Flower

My first ever Haiku...

The Flower                                                  (Haiku)

In the soft green grass,

Blooms upright softly, 

A lovely flower.

Author's Note

This is my first ever Haiku, so let me know if I wrote any mistakes.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You create wonderful imagery with this brevity Martiya. A flower thriving on its own. Lovely.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Sorry I took so long getting to this one, Martiya, Beautifully written!... even with the short first line :))

[Martiya Daman]

Better now?

[Dylan Macadham]

Yes, Wow! (lol, you knew I'd say it :) ...True!

[Martiya Daman]

Humph, Humbug lol! I didn't know btw :)))

[Dylan Macadham]

........😅