Excited

My favorite days :)

Excited

I leapt out of my bed,

Out my father said,

"You can have anything to eat today",

I happily shouted, "Hurray!"

I asked my dad to make noodles,

I also wanted spinach strudels,

Out he tossed them in the saucepan,

Hid the tomatoes before he can.

Boiling hot water,

Added spices and powder,

Noodles span round and round, 

Smells speeded around.

At the end, tasty noodles,

Shaped in doodles,

I ate them in a gulp,

With tea in my cup.

Author's Note

Sometimes on cheat days, when my mom wasn't around, my dad would cook Maggi (Famous noodles of India) for me. I loved them very much. And with this poem, I describe it.

Reviews

[Twilight]

This is light and frivolous, whilst also revealing a genuine fondness with your father. Clearly, you have a warm bond; and appreciate his cooking skills lol.

By coincidence, I recently enjoyed a Thai meal at a local restaurant in Belper; where assorted noodle options were very much on the menu lol.

For some reason, your recent "read request" has vanished from my list. Feel free to resend it to me, Martiya. I would have reviewed it sooner, if I had felt sufficiently inspired. Best wishes.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Julian. By coincidence, after I wrote this poem, I checked dinner, and it was also noodles. Sure, I will send the read request again.

[Martiya Daman]

I tried to, but I could not because I already sent you one. But I can tell you the name of the poem? It is called "A Journey Never Easy" And it should be a bit recent.

[Martiya Daman]

I mean you can see it in the "Author" part here.

[Dylan Macadham]

I love this happy-hearted piece Martiya! :)
Sometimes happy morning pleasures are the best!

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Dylan! Nope, it is me and my dad sneaking around at night to eat during the last year of the day lol! Kids these days 😂

[Martiya Daman]

I mean Last day of the year, silly me :)

[Martiya Daman]

*meant .

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, you "juxtaposed" day and year😅

[Martiya Daman]

Yep! And you add too many syllables to your Senryus and Haikus :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Aha, you caught me!😮

[Martiya Daman]

Be careful next time Hahaha :D

[Dylan Macadham]

Yes, Sensei !😎