The Fish

My first ever Limerick

The Fish                                        (Limerick)

Once there was a fish,

Who wanted to wish,

To get on ground,

Goes and dies around,

I hope it will not be a dish!

Author's Note

Sorry, Vegetarians... Forgive me.
Also, this is my first time writing a limerick, so let me know if there are any mistakes.

Reviews

[poetgurl]

Aw, the poor fishy, very creative

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for taking your time, poetgurl.

[Chris Shaw]

Poor little fishy ending up in a dishy:) A fun write Martiya. Never written a limerick myself. Well done you.

Chris

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for the review Chris, fishes deserve better.

[Dylan Macadham]

...don't know much about limericks, Martiya, but loved this. Fun-loving and charming :)
...but, haha, should One be Once?😎

[Martiya Daman]

Plus, too much dark humor 😅
They are supposed to be funny.
Limericks have a AABBA pattern basically.

[Dylan Macadham]

Haha, ok, so lighten up😃
Again, Should "One" be "Once?" ...

[Martiya Daman]

Oh!!! Will fix that! I type too fast you know :]

[Dylan Macadham]

typing too fast is a symptom of being very smart😎

[Martiya Daman]

I fixed it. Yep, I remember the keys well! :))))

[Dylan Macadham]

..........🙂

[Martiya Daman]

..................🙂🙂🙂