It Was A Dream?

It Was A Dream?

A Story by Martiya Daman
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A contest entry for "A Dream Within One", and actually a poem

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It Was A Dream?
I was sleeping silently on the bed,
Fell off, a terrible shock I met,
Look outside, my head & towers were shaking,
Then everything started breaking.

A brick fell on my head-
And instead...
"Oh, Dan!" A woman angerily said,
"What, but I am Mary?" I saw I was in a bed.

I looked at my hands and legs,
Looked at my mirror, Oh my head!
All Dizzy and Different, I went to their balcony,
The towers were upright, is that reality?

I was another person the entire time?
It Was A Dream?
Did real life reach and climb?
More questions to be seen.

© 2025 Martiya Daman


Author's Note

Martiya Daman
This was for the contest, A Dream Within One. Thanks for holding the contest, Alice, Interesting theme and I am sure more people will join!

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This is a great poem Martiya! Your use of words was excellent, and I love the way your protagonist was seemingly going in and out of reality. Keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Martiya Daman

10 Months Ago

Thanks for your review, Alice!

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Martiya Daman
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I am just writing stories & poems and making others smile, I like it. I am 10 years old and Indian, Glad you came to read my profile. It's definetly a pleasure to write here. My thought: Dreams are.. more..