Confused Love

A Poem by Honey-Bee

Haiku

My mind is boiling

Stir fry on the back burner

Steam clouds my vision

© 2014 Honey-Bee

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Coyote Poetry

Love can confuse us. Good to have clouded vision when love is near. Very nice use of words. A complete poem in 14 words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote! Glad you enjoyed it!

M.K. Jawdat

Very interesting and clever enjoyed this short piece

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks M.K. Jawdat!

PoemRodent

Love it, short sweet and speak volumes... Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks PoemRodent!

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Added on March 27, 2014
Last Updated on March 27, 2014

Author

Honey-Bee

Ventura , CA

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I like to read and write poems and stories I love nature, kids and God. I enjoy the outdoors very much. I love the beach and mountains. I love my four grandchildren and hope to have more. I have.. more..