THAT APRIL AFTERNOON....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THAT APRIL AFTERNOON

 

I remember so clearly
that night
from the moment you opened the door
and I entered
the look of enchantment
in your eyes
your masculine figure, your jeans
your body speaking to mine
from a distance
there was a hidden desire
in each gesture

I remember so clearly
of our silly talk
the crystalline laughter 
 the red wine toast
with our hands across the table
and through the glasses transparency
our eyes shining with desire
and that lamp in the corner
 sketching your face
(or was it the wine
taking me away from reality?

 

I remember so clearly
the dizzy music    
 echoing in the background
and when you got up
your attractive and masculine body,
slowly pacing the room
and in an irreverent way
increasing the sound of music
singing and smiling like a boy
(how my eyes loved you at that moment
plucking your being completely)

I remember so clearly
 your warm hands inside my blouse
touching my shivering and cold breasts
your begging look
while laying my body on that blue couch
your closed mouth drawing chills
on my neck
the smell of your cologne mixed with your essence
 seemed to draw a shiver on my back
making me close my eyes, half opening my lips
to gather your wine kisses

 

I remember so clearly
the complete and utter surrender
the clothes on the floor, of our naked bodies
sighs and muffled sounds
the words whispered in my ear
the love shouting in the shape of senses
your soft hair in my hands
and your eyes closed in absolute surrender
outside a shade of dream in the indigo colored sky
a feeling of calm and certainty
struck me so clearly
that unforgettable April afternoon

 

Mary Fioratti

Author's Note

This poem is a real story that I remember every detail. So many wonderful moments I have had in my life with someone that fulfills my life in a such special
way....

Reviews

[newyearnorma]

great work

[Manpreet]

A beautifully expressed poem!

[Groovy]

Your poem is vividly descriptive and well expressed.

[Boldpen]

Nicely written. loved the poem.

[Sarah]

very powerful and sweet. Nice work...
:P

[BeccaB]

wow i love it ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

The moments in time become better with age. To look back at times of opening doors to love and desire. Can create a smile many years later. I like the kind and beautiful story in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Me]

Nice imagery in this piece

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhh my... what a breath taking piece... so full of heartfelt emotion and takes the minds eye on such a beautiful trip of pure moment...
thank you for sharing!!!