Life's Current

Tide

We crash on the shore
  Leaving pieces of ourselves
    Taking parts of the shore back out to sea with us

Reviews

[Tree]

This poem really made me think. So few words
and such a deep meaning.

Diego

[marlayesterday]

I love how you spaced this. Very few words, such a profound reality. I like it! :)

[The Refined Poet]

this is an excellent example of how to communicate and evoke powerful thoughts and feelings in few words. well written poem.

[Rtrt]

Thank you for the kind words.