I fell in Love

A mix of the way my body and my mind fell in love.

I fell in love with your rough voice in the morning light-

I fell in love with the way you drive my body in the heavy night.

 ---I fell in love with your stories, the way you ease my worries. 

My mind fell in love with your brain, my soul only responds to your flame, my body is a wild beast that fights to be tame, a slave that only you can claim. 

 ---I fell in love with the way you whisper my name. You are the         only one who can keep me sane. 

I fell in love, oh did I ever. Now darling make the skies explode until we are drenched in the rain of our love. 

 

Author's Note

I'm not 100% satisfied with the flow/structure, it's still a work in progress.

Reviews

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I felt the love in this piece complete admiration and devotion in a sense for the person physically and mentally.

[ANTO]

I see what you mean with the structure MT, the words are fine I feel but the bit in the middle - namely, 'the middle' - could be centre jusftified maybe but remain where it is
eg "My mind fell in love with your brain, my soul only responds to your flame, my body is a wild beast that fights to be tame, a slave that only you can claim. " - could become

My mind fell in love with your brain
my soul only responds to your flame
my body is a wild beast that fights to be tame
a slave that only you can claim.

anyway - the words are fab, I like the whole passion and the love in this.
:)

ps this text box wont allow centre justifying but you get the idea... :)

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you!

[Jamestown]

Fantastic! I am so happy for you! This piece screams love for sure, nice work.
I have one that will add to your love spell called so special, I think you will enjoy it.
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you so much! And I'll check it out!