Number One

Fight for me even when there is not a battle to be fought.

Come for me even when I don’t need saving.

But above all; Love me when I don’t know I need loving. 

Author's Note

Not really deep poetic or good even but its just what I'm feeling and I need to get it out.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

It's funny--I read the three lines and thought, "this message is rather deep", and then saw your note. The meaning of "deep" can be debated, I guess. I like the poem and think you've done a fine job of expressing one beautiful theme.

[alifeacoustic]

Succinct and to the point. Why say more when what is said is plenty. Great job to fir so much into three lines.

[alifeacoustic]

PS....Now I have that Goldfrapp song, number one stuck in my head :)

[Jamestown]

Very nice write! I really like the concept here,
should be obvious but really it isn't!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you!