Unorthodox Poetry

Haters gonna hate.

'Uncertainty in Life'

-Unorthodox Poetry-

There has been a time in this vivid existence of mine,

I speculated hours, thought a lot of bottomless thinking

 

I wandered the way through depression and existential

anxiety only to be able to answer one question.

 

I figured.

Men cannot solve the mystery of ancient universe-

there is a barricade deeply imbedded inside our minds.

 

I learned. That I can’t look upon another man and simply just say:

“I suggest you stop thinking before your thoughts go to deep

and your life feels unreal and the thoughts-

a burden.”

 

There’s nothing immoral about doubting!

 

Life is about doubting

it’s natural in our human minds, so-

you can’t even avoid it.

 

Doubting makes us interact more and

interacting is one of the basic instincts of human beings.

 

I’m completely conscious that many feel like these thoughts are just-

an intoxication of your minds. Don’t rely on science to provide all the

answers. You seek knowledge - that's why you feel uncertainty!

 

Don’t feel frightened by not knowing.

You are lost in an unknown universe.

That’s the truth, probably… or?

 

I pay tribute to a wise man that once said: 

“You and I " we’re the lucky ones -

the ones who can see, feel and explore."

You perceive experience and investigate,

don’t waste this precious gift.

We are the lucky ones.

Author's Note

You can hate or instead you might just start asking yourself a bunch of questions!

Reviews

[Sibling]

Existential,
Critical thinking...
#freethink - I like brother.

Science can't be scientifically proven.

[MassThinker]

Thanks a lot, Poet. Have a nice day!

[Wildflower]

Bravo. I agree. Love the flow

[MassThinker]

Thank you, Wildflower. I appreciate that you took time read one of my writings. :)

[Wildflower]

No problem. I like your writing. I expect there will be more that I find to my liking (:

[Mark]

I just posted this on Facebook today. Think it sums up my feelings and thoughts about your write.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pwvB4_Te8A&feature=youtube_gdata_player

[MassThinker]

We are the music makers,
And we are the dreamers of dreams,

Hahaha sweet, Mark. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Very wise life advice in your writing. If we question things...seek the answers....we are truly living. I liked this. lydi**

[MassThinker]

Thanks for checking me out, Lydi! I appreciate it a lot! :)