My Façade Broken

A very short poem.

My façade was broken and
made useless, therefor
my soul unprotected
and kevlar decayed.

The creator will state,
here you shall stay
till your story has
died and been
lost in time.

Now you
finally
end.

Author's Note

Any criticsm is welcomed.

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

A wonderful short poem too...

YB

[MassThinker]

Thanks a lot, YB. :)

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the form and the poem were all great ...Thank you for penning...:)

[MassThinker]

Likewise, thank you for reading, I appreciate it! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Prime]

Very nicely written, dude. :))

[MassThinker]

Thanks for reading! :)

[Prime]

You're welcome.. :)

[Frieda P]

Even though people have attacked our strength, our resilience must remain intact till the end...we go on even after the damage has been done, nicely pen'd.

[MassThinker]

Thanks, Frieda.

And you are absolutely right. We overcome hardship and move on this is were we become stronger. Thanks for checking me out.

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine MT....

[shallimarRose]

I like this especially the ending lines.. Felt like the story book has come to an end.. Font too small on the laptop at least for my eyes.. I assume you are working from a desktop? Good poem.. shallimarRose

[MassThinker]

Hey!
Thanks for checking me out, appreciate it.
I will increase the text size, I’m always writing in very small texture like 7-8 size. I can’t have it any other way. Thank you.