I Don't Know

I don’t know what you think of me,

But I know what I think of you,

I may not even know you,

First off I think your name is cute,

And explains all about you,

I’ve only see you in lunch,

But I would like to see you more…

Reviews

[RedInk524]

Cute. The description of a typical crush. Now, 95% of crushes end in disappointment and die on thier own and unnoticed. But... Those odds can easily be defeated if people would just gather the courage to speak up. Now its your turn, are you going to just keep this admiration a crush or speak up and give it a chance to grow?

[Zoe Jay]

Very sweet little poem, quirky, charming, and hopeful, without being cloying. A neat capturing of a moment, of a passing thought waiting to become something else, and that sense of seed planted, perhaps to grow, perhaps to wither. I think you captured the sense of promise very vividly, but also, simply. This poem has a wholesomeness because of the simplicity. :)

[SINDE]

Your piece isn't descriptive as such but it's really nice. Many of us can relate to it. Keep your pen moving my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

The "I don't know" can leave a big empty spot. Better to have lost then wish to test the boundaries of life. A poem with un-open questions and possibilities. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like how this is short and expresses your feelings plainly. Very cute and sweet.

[Lindsey]

I like it, it's emotional and cute to read. I like how it shows curiosity, it's a good peace of work. :)

[brenda]

aaaw:) sweet perfect ! now go prove to er you are woth it i alreadytold you how to so go ahead and tell me if it works or just be yourself :)