Bittersweet

A boys thoughts about a girl he loves till his heart dies.

I hear her name speaking hymns in my ear. An when I'm alone I can only feel her presence consume me with warm thoughts. She's such a clever one a true riddle and will always be. Pink is her lovely primary color, one to be recognized. As I only see her lovely black irises as they glow in the sunshine. She was the sweetest bitter candy you could ever learn to taste. You could truly love her forever more. Nothing will ever change she said. And as I did, I adored her as much as my great escape. I'll be the one to catch her last breath and save our final farewells. She was my bittersweet girl.

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this is very poetic...interesting use of colour and emotion and as the title suggests bittersweet. you've found the essence of something here. well done :)