Unmoored from Heaven’s Breath

onward looking nature’s sprawl

welcomes ingress

flawed acceptance

thoughts eternal

unmoored from heaven’s breath

unravel forces unseen

casting urgent

a moment’s ire

unto deafening depths

of untold familiarity

 

Reviews

[YashiRocks]

Beautifully put. Love it.

[Max Meunier]

thank you for your kind words. i truly appreciate it

[sencha]

a prime example of "brief but very powerful". masterfully done.

[Max Meunier]

i appreciate this very much. i tried to stay true to the essence of the feelings involved. thank you for your time and kind words