Butterfly

My friend was bold

Her skin was cold,

She floats like a butterfly

Disappears, in the blink of an eye.

Reviews

[Harshita]

Your short words seem like a magic. Thank you for sharing this. Please review my works too.

[horizon]

4 lines and the beauty is described..nice work

[Mayank]

Thank you, horizon!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nicely written! The last two lines, the imagery was amazing!

[Mayank]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.

[iamshadowine]

small but lovely! would love to its extended version (if you write one) keep writing!

[Mayank]

Thank you! These are fragments of my imagination and I am very weak when it's come to writing lengthy poems.

[Aphy!]

Short and sweet. Its amazing how so much emotion is in a 4 stanza poem.
Well done

[Mayank]

Thank you Aphy!

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Short but full of meaning. Like butterfy. I love it. Well done.

[Anindita Janhabee]

SHORT YET STRIKING EMOTION.. NICE SONNET DEAR FRIEND, WELL PENNED AND THOUGHT..
THOUGHTS FLOW IN THE BEST WAY...
GOOD JOB..

[Mayank]

Thank you!

[Kiran]

Simple and striking. Am sure it connects deep inside for many(including me).

[Mayank]

Yes, it does. Glad you liked it.

[Paavana Varma]

"Brevity is the soul of wit" :) wonderful

[Mayank]

Thank you Paavana!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Brevity at its best.
So much said in a few words.
Liked it!