Butterfly

My friend was bold

Her skin was cold,

She floats like a butterfly

Disappears, in the blink of an eye.

Reviews

[MadalaJose]

I like the simplicity of the poem.

[Tamika Finley]

The simplicity of it and how well and vivid the description is, is truly amazing

[Mayank]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[Tamika Finley]

no problem!

[Sultrysoul]

Very beautiful...even in its shortness sometimes the most things are said with the least amount of words

[Mayank]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.

[Sultrysoul]

You are very welcome.... :)

[Flutterby aish]

The title grabbed my attention as its pretty personal to me. And I'm glad i ended up here. The best way to describe your piece - With few words you took my breath away. Honestly its short but it leaves an impact on the reader! Nice job done.

[Mayank]

Thank you, friend. I am glad to hear that it connected to you.

[ELMAN]

i love it ,short with a personel touch in it
great job

[Mayank]

Thank you Elman

[ELMAN]

you are welome

[Chirag Kumar]

Conveys loads of meaning in a few lines. This is awesome dude. i am inspired :D

[Mayank]

Glad to know that :) Thank you.

[Jesse]

There is your personal style in your write. Good job!

[Mayank]

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Woah! Beautiful. Short but meaningful. Love it :)

[Mayank]

Thank you dear, glad you liked it ;)

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME :) I loved it!

[Created Unfinished]

I'd like it more if you used more descriptive words.

[Mayank]

I could have used but then I didn't wanted, I wanted to make it short and simple... let readers think, make their own assumption. Thank you reviewing!

[Muslimah Triyati]

short poem but is nice to be read