Lethal Dosage

just playing with the alphabets

Lost within

Somber rage,

Day  bloomed and died.

Reviews

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

WOW! Loved it! If that is 'just' playing with alphabets, I am speechless!

Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of poem, Mayank. It is outstanding!

- Anjana

[Mayank]

yeah, it's more like playing with the alphabets when you are tripping your balls out. haha!

[Cantharis]

when i read it i thought about the little things spoiling a day with great beginning, when i turn into a stoic silently waiting the night to start again. then i saw the lsd and other memories came to mind.

[Mayank]

hahaha! This was the experience. Thank you for reviewing and catching my point here!

[~]

Some sobering truth in this piece. Great write Mayank.

[Mayank]

thank you so much reviewing...

[Haley Wilson]

Only 8 words long but it still resonates within the reader. That is a hard thing to do, indeed. Kudos to you!

[Mayank]

Thank you Haley for reading and reviewing!

[Nila M.]

I was just thinking again, that a day blooms and dies in a natural sense too, the sun rise is like a bloom, and the night can be like death. And to think we experience that blooming and death day after, after day. I don't mean that in a depressing way, it's just kind of something I was thinking about. Thank you for making me think.

[Mayank]

Thank you Nila for reading it... I just want other reader to think the same way you were, I will inbox you the structure and how I wrote this. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

[Nila M.]

Thank you, I really enjoy reading everything! And I appreciate seeing the unique perspectives we all have as a result of our own experiences.

[Nila M.]

"day bloomed and died" speaks to me. At least for me that one line said a lot, without saying a lot. Intense image... Thanks!

[Skai Rain]

Strong message.
Few words.
Well done.

[Mayank]

Thank you Brit!!!

[rashu]

short but still feels like thousands of words in just three lines..
keep it up

[Mayank]

thank you Rashu for reading...

[Avinash]

Man you are on LSD here :) But the writing is brilliant.

[Mayank]

floating man.... thanks

[Jamsheed Shafi]

short in length but very deep thoughts.

[Mayank]

Thanks for the review!