Simplicity

~~~
Mid-morning's aeronaut rises from favored cup ...
Colombia's savory bouquet
co-mingled
with silence
as respite whispers of another day

Floating ...

somewhere
beneath canopies of hand-dyed batik

sharing moments
basking in lingered reverie

Simplicity ...

First sip
to last sigh
~

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'simplicity'
McEltic,
Just a few words aptly chosen give this poem a very light and happy feeling. '
"Mid-morning's aeronaut rises from favored cup...
co -mingled
with silence"
Oh, the sweet quiet of mornings while the sun comes through my morning. In fact here I sit with coffee.
"Floating" Nice! Yes, I so get that.
Now this I love too. It reminds of a piece of batik that I have from Malaysia from having gone there several years ago when first married.
Just lovely:
"sharing moments
basking in lingered reverie
Simplicity...
First sip
to last sigh"
Good morning to you and hope your day is as lovely as your poem has graced me.
Kathy

[McEltic]

Thank you Kathy... cheers :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks and cheers to you too.

[sette]

the morning coffee and the view of what lies ahead are what makes life beautiful because there is always something to look forward to. beautifully written.

[McEltic]

Thank you sette :)

[emipoemi]

wow! You can even make the most mundane things sublime experiences......wow! Well done!

[McEltic]

Thank you emipoemi, glad you enjoyed it :)

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[barleygirl]

Having my first cup of coffee in the morning is a simple quiet celebration, so this is how I read your message. I like the way you suggest coffee with: "Colombia's savory bouquet" . . . and other subtle references to the simplicity of morning solitude (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[McEltic]

Than you Margie :)