Sun Kissed

~~~
Droplets cling fast to an icicle
their silent plea echoes in vain
Mist gently lifts
in the wake of the sun
and tears
slip their bond once again
~~~

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Sun Kissed'
McEltic,
First line' "Droplets cling fast to an icicle" We are like that. Experiences which work the reality from our souls in tears, yearning, pain, and hope. We do work from the inside out. I thought the reality of life bringing the layers life an icicle melting and freezing and then finallly giving up to the lessons learned or not was the message I took from your poem.
"In the wake of the sun and tears slip their bonds once again." Yes our moments are lived and experienced within the mercy of opportunities in the sadness and joy which is our own.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Chris Shaw]

A wonderful piece of brevity which offers the reader some spectacular imagery close up. Nicely composed.

Chris

[Tabby Mac]

I LOVE THIS LITTLE DIDDY! It really packs a punch! I love how in a few words I was able to experience so much! Well done!
Tabby

[Sarah Wilson]

Wow! The imagery is vivid and amazing i love the beautiful sadness

[emipoemi]

Spring is on the rise!! And so is poetry about rebirth and redevelopment! Yay!

[McEltic]

For sure... Spring will add new life to a stale muse :)

[emipoemi]

no question :)