The Sum of my Brim

~
When clouds roll by
Disappear
in a blink
Leaving starlight
to compete for a nook in my cranny

I find
that the sum of my brim
grows brighter each night
But
I persistently
reflect
from my fanny
~

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Interesting way to suggest that you go around mooning your night skies! *wink! wink!* Nicely fresh, playful, & image-provoking . . . love the singular rhyme which punctuates your meaning. Great offering to brighten anyone's way of thinking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[McEltic]

I have to careful with the mooning around here because this time of year, my wife will be chasing me with a box of Christmas Ornaments :)

[Cherrie]

A great poem to start my day, loved your wit a fun read.