The rise

Releasing the past and embracing the future...

It was the sunset,

the darkness followed her eye,

as mountains swallowed.

 

Rivers in-between,

tears of heartache spill through cracks,

she drowns with spirit.

 

Remains highlighted,

revelations were exposed;

it was time for change.

 

Ancient eye emerged,

 distant starlight overhead,

the dream she once wished.

 

Passions reignite,

she rediscovered herself,

and slept on a dream.

 

It was the sunrise,

shadows retreat from her eye,

a new day begins…

 

Rubbing her eyes into the sunlight, the excitement of building her dream lifted spirits, and she could smile again…

 

 

Reviews

[i am LiLy]

so awesome ending words pal.......really hooks you and ends on such a impacting memorable choice of words...nice dude real nice mate.

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thanks for reading Lily, I'm happy you enjoyed it!

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you for your kind words Nolo, I'm happy you enjoyed it!

[Nolo Segundo]

This is quite good! A literal joy to read--and loved the line' ...slept on a dream'. Wow...!

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you for reading Annette!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lovely image and words. She dreams of Sunset and sunrise- darkness and light- despair and hope. Eloquent wordage and vivid imagery-"Ancient eye emerged"- 'Here comes the sun...."

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Wow! Thanks Norah! You won't have to buy it though, friends read free of charge...

[Norah]

You made me clearly see the picture. I think you're so creative and if you have a book I would buy it :)

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you Dawn, I'm flattered...Sorry about the eye thing, it was intentional. Thanks again!

[Dawn]

Well whatever inspired this it was indeed creative. I lol tend to cringe at the use of eye rather than eyes perhaps because I like seeing pairs ..but it didn't matter at all because the imagery was beautiful. A tribute to your skill as a writer me thinks;)

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

I'm not sure where the inspiration came for this, I assume from some of the writing I've been reading lately...