Poet-tree

A little thing can grow into something big...

The seeded spirit

planted in the soiled heart

the blood soaked germination

tearing through the larynx

what?...in the head

(eye sight)

branching fingertips reach for the window

(clicking)

tapped in

the words to be

grow into a poet-tree

Reviews

[wordman]

the seed of inspiration,watch it gtow

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

It's a beautiful thing... thanks for reading wordman.

[apennylate]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

A click-clacking style presentation on this one... Tearing through my... A soiled heart branching... A seed with spoiled start...

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you for the invite, I look forward to posting. And thanks for reading...

[Norah]

Your style of writing is unique. I can relate to this and to a lot of your writings!
I really love your poetry

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thanks again Norah, you are too kind. :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, I like this poem. I like the analogy of the seed and the body. The seeded spirit is an attractive idea. And the rhyming couplet at the end is clever.

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you for the kind words Aunt Astri, I'm glad you liked it...

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great title and poem. Love the form of a tree & perfect metaphor- unforgettable!

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thanks for reading Annette!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i particularly relate to this...i used to live in a very old house and outside my window was this beautiful old tree...i used to sit at my typewriter---and tap out poems as i looked at that "poet tree"
and what i wrote grew into poems.
thanks for this one.
j.

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Thank you j., i'm glad you enjoyed it.