Message in a Bottle

A song I wrote for Kris.

Verse 1:

Dear Kris, I really do miss

All the times that we spent.

They're crowding my mind.

Dear Kris, I  know it's too late

But I still wait for your calls to this very date.

And what do I have to do

Just to make you come back?

I'll do anything you want me to.



Pre Chorus: 

Oh... tides rising fast for me.

Oh...I'm drowning here at sea.

Oh...and all that's on my mind is you.


Chorus: 


Kris I know that sorry's not enough.

The things I told you must have been tough for you to hear.

I know that I said something wrong

And I regret it now and wish I said something else.

I messaged you a thousand times 

But then again you must be mad at me.

So, I wrote it all down.

I hope the tide will carry it out to you.

So I'll let the sea carry this message in a bottle for me.



Verse 2: 

Dear Kris, the days have been long

And the nights even longer since you've been gone.

Dear Kris, I know this sounds cheap

But you really do mean the whole world to me.




Pre Chorus 2: 

Oh... there's nothing much else to say.

Oh... the tide is taking me away.

Oh... I just hope this reaches you in time.


Repeat Chorus 

Bridge: 

Say it's better late than never.

 Say I'm just in time.

But if you don't want to talk again.

Well, that's fine.

I just wanted to apologize.


Repeat Chorus except for last line

So I'll let the sea carry this message in a bottle (2x)

I'll let the sea carry this message in a bottle for me.


 M.E.B.
~05-17-14~

Author's Note

Ooooooohhhhhh kay! So, instead of a poem I wrote a song a few days ago and this is what came out. I will post the audio later so stay in tuned. The quality will not be too good though so I'm sorry for that. But I will try my best to post it around maybe 1 am tonight cause it's pretty noisy right now as we are right beside a basketball court and there's have been games going on lately. So...if you're interested, I will link the audio here later and I will post in in my journal. So...I'll see you guys later this evening then!

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Here is the song: -----> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1G5TOgFVwU

Sorry for the bad quality of the song xD

Please comment :)

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Reviews

[zelf]

Btw, I think there's a category for "songs" if you want to reach more appropriate feedback :)
I really like that you actually posted the song too! Makes it so much realer.
Nice voice btw, It carried the song, especially since the lyrics were... very straight forward. It needed a good voice so to say.

Good luck!

[SmittyJas]

Message in a bottle I found it very well composed the song says it all your love for him was very strong.

[Kieta!]

I watched the video of the song; you have beautiful voice and I'm totally jealous!!!

P.S. Just out of curiosity, what microphone did you use? ;)

[Jas_I_M]

Awesome ! Great piece and song is cool !:)

[Girl With A Pen]

I love this! These lyrics are so beautiful! Great job