sadder day mourning

sadder day mourning

A Poem by Tim Lion

sadder day mourning,

constantly touching the knife in my boot,

choked a man dressed as a giant teddy bear,

while a red bearded liar,

mouth sewn shut,

blinked Morse code distress signals

with cobalt blue eyes.

© 2012 Tim Lion


Author's Note

Tim Lion
everyone in this poem is me

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sounds crowded in there... lol

I dig this kind of juxtaposed imagery, it builds and builds....

best title/body combo yet.

I don't like "furries" very much either. hahahaaha.
Did you ever think that this "group" synergy of yours is the source of your astounding creativity? Sign those boys to a contract pronto.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Sweet strangeness to my eyes and ears. Descriptive, powerful, just awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds crowded in there... lol

I dig this kind of juxtaposed imagery, it builds and builds....

best title/body combo yet.

I don't like "furries" very much either. hahahaaha.
Did you ever think that this "group" synergy of yours is the source of your astounding creativity? Sign those boys to a contract pronto.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tim Lion
Tim Lion

Lake Worth, FL



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Sometimes, when the moon presses her naked chest to my window, and my wife is carving the value from trash scraps, I feel like I may never be able to outshine my finite timeline. And the worst part is.. more..