Mascara Tears

Let a horrible day get to me.

Mascara Tears

I walk upon the valley of the living,

I look down from my sitting,

Watching them scurry around for nothing.

 

My every breath was for you,

I love you with every beat of my fragile heart,

So i must say good-bye to everything to live for.

 

I died for every minute I lost without you,

I stayed to watch the making of my funeral,

The tears on your face made me drift away,

My sanity with in my hands is now deaths toy.

Reviews

[Sarah]

dude levi was right you do need therapy lol jk it was amazing

[Mistaken]

I love it...especially these lines:

"I stayed to watch the making of my funeral,
The tears on your face made me drift away,"

good flow:) great imagery

[Lexi]

I love it, so deep. My favorite would have to be the second stanza.
Fabulous write/read.

[Lexi =]]

Very deep and emotional poem. I really like it. Good job expressing yourself =]