The Hourglass

Wedding promise poem

 

The Vessel Holds The Sands Of Time

So Too Our Lives As One Combine

 

I Feel The Weight Remove From Me

To Free My Space So I May See

 

The Burdens You Do Seek To Purge

So We Invert And As We Merge

 

Your Troubles Fill My Waiting Soul

We Are Two Halves That Make A Whole

 

As Each One Yearns The Other Gives

When Either Fills The Other Lives

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words and thoughts.
"As Each One Yearns The Other Gives
When Either Fills The Other Lives"
Life is giving and taking. We need soft voice and we need to share kind voice in return. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mehameha]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your story and poetry.

[Nisreen]

Stunning
Binding in every way
every single words speaks of this will you hold within to share it all with someone

[Mehameha]

Written for two dear friends, at their Hawaiian wedding at Kahala. They have an hourglass in every room of their home to keep them mindful of their promise and need to be giving and receiving of love everyday.

[Nisreen]

thats pretty neat !!!

[Tiana]

Aloha Mehameha! Beautifully written!

[Mehameha]

It was what I wrote for a wedding ceremony at Kahala. Glad you like it.

[Tiana]

Yes, I enjoyed it a lot and I'm sure the wedding at Kahala was just as beautiful as your poem.