Renew

Inspirational, Cycle, Positive

He stretched his arms to touch the stars and dreamed of a girl dancing in the wind

 

Pounding hooves on the seashore and he turned as her hair brushed his cheek

 

Stars screamed in fear of the suns flaming fingers

 

Scented snow has awoken the crocus and he rises renewed

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful, useful and wonderful use of words. You create visions, change and good ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love can do this to us..almost a mythological feeling to this one...

quite an image from these four lines...i always like this kind of poem...open ended...and less is more..

j.

[Mehameha]

Thank you. It was inspired by Jim Morrison, "The Doors". I hope more of this comes from that place. Thank you for reading, your comments and suggestions. Need to go back and study yours as it will also inspire a new work. You write very well.