Toleration

You play with my feelings. I play with your words.

There are No limits to

Her            

 To  rmenting

 le thal

         ra vaging                 tempta tion.

Reviews

[Tbear]

Ay! That was mmmmmm HUGELY intense! loved it..

[highonwords]

sounds like the person this poem is pertaining to is cruel and deadly

steph

[Mélania Woolf]

Oh yes. She certainly is! I don't think I'll ever know someone who faces my declaration of love with a cold " I have limits to my toleration". ever. lol.

[highonwords]

that kinda sounds funny with a cruel, disgusted twist - don't worry, you deserve someone better
read morethat kinda sounds funny with a cruel, disgusted twist - don't worry, you deserve someone better

steph

[Mélania Woolf]

I'm thinking this cruel disgusted twist is about exactly what I need, for now. It's inspirational in so many ways.

[highonwords]

oh no, don't even try to feed on negative feelings - you'll grow vultures in your heart, that'll eat your eyes from the inside of their sockets

steph

[Mélania Woolf]

Haha beautiful image!
I don't think one can always write about happy things. Nothing interesting about stability.

[highonwords]

don't fall for the romantic vigilante - the bad boys in writing - me, i thrive on stability, because it lets me do the writing with a level-headedness and precision that fits all the pegs and pieces of the poem/story into a unified shape - writing is hard work - so you gotta take care of yourself

[Mélania Woolf]

I am only making use of that kind of attitude. Inspiration comes in different shapes and this is one of them. But I still keep my distance not to get hurt or anything. Thank you