Under the Moon

Under the light of the moon.

He stretched,

The light was on him.

Devan looked at him

and the moon shattered.

His dark skin shone,

when he was under the moon.

The fire on the beach

crackled.

He danced,

the song was electric.

He smiled,

And Devan stood

to dance with the boy

beneath the moonlight.

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Mel Jayne, under the light of the moon there is magic. Magical words that offer the most serene of images. Mahalo for this beautiful piece. Izzy

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you very much.

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Zoya]

This is beautiful! You've portrayed the moon as a symbol of love in a magnificent way. I wanted more of those descriptions, but still, it's a wonderful poem. Well written!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[Zoya]

don't mention

[Rubein Geterminah]

Good poem
It depicts nature's Providence
And only observers of nature do write such poems.
I will want you reading my works also.
I have a poem that talks about the moon
I will share it soon
Keep it up

[Mel Jayne]

Thanks. I really like nature

[Rubein Geterminah]

You welcome

[Ace St. Jean]

There's something about this poem, that I love.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you!