He.

He is chaos.

It's in the way that he moves,

The way that he breathes.

He is Life,

Full of colour and song.

He can change

In a breath.

He is happiness 

And a storm.

And he is the best

And the most dangerous.

Because just seeing him

Once, at a glance,

Might change your life. 

Reviews

[Patrick]

sounds like a hamster I used to own! On a serious note this is a decent piece of writing.

[Mel Jayne]

Thanks a lot hahaha

[Cœur]

Fascinating, this is a very nice piece. I like how you started it off with "He is chaos," that's a very good start. It could have been longer, but overall very good job.

[Mel Jayne]

Thanks. I'm just focussing on getting loads of writing out there and then going back over and refining with a fresh outlook on things.

[Cœur]

That's cool. I'm looking forward to it.

[Mr.Writer]

Very well described... I really enjoyed reading and liked the way you wrote it! :)

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked my style