Tip-toes

There are times that I wish I could hate you 

For you not being any better than me.

I want to hate you for not being honest

And living this lie we continue to lead.

I want to hate you for making me 'render

By the touch of thy finger tip to tip;

I want to hate you for being that impressive,

For accepting my sorrowed sigh via thy sniff.

I want to hate you because of your dimples

That Nature painted you so masculine, gorgeous – grace.

I want to hate you for hearing inside me

-  Meeting my mind in the in-between space.

If I hate you it'd be only my tip-toes

On finest line drawn ''tween our love and hate.

If I hate you it'd be caused of my paining

That I may not love you till unknown late date.

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

i love this poem. "Meeting my mind in the in-between space" i love the imagery, the deep thought-provoking wording. "For you not being any better than me. I want to hate you for not being honest
And living this lie we continue to lead." i love these lines, as i can so relate. it's exactly what i'm going through right now. we look to someone else to help us, to save us, to be better, to be our angel, and are always disappointed. no human is better than the other. & we all continue to put on the play, the show must go on,the lies, the falsities. a beautiful write.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

- Meeting my mind in the in-between space.

If I hate you it'd be only my tip-toes

On finest line drawn ''tween our love and hate.


Mid blowing piece of poetry. I felt it deep. Great write!

Cheers!
FF

[Sagemind]

That's pretty powerful. At first I thought you were going to make this from a toe's viewpoint, but then I realized you weren't, LOL...

[LatoyaEvans]

"There are times that I wish I could hate you

For you not being any better than me." ... Powerful

[Marienel aka ''TWEETY''..]

wow...
wonderful
love the words...
keep it up...
so powerful...

[Taylor H]

I agree with Angelalalala. This was great