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A Poem by Melobldnfr

I'll give.

07/26/13

Why put your hand on my heart

If you won't allow mine on yours?

Lose composure to me. It's okay.

I'll give in return.

© 2013 Melobldnfr

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An owl on the moon

There is such a tension here in this moment... the hopeful exchange of love and life... the wonderings of holding back... it is like a dance of hearts...

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

It seems my saying less in this one is getting more across than I could have possibly imagined. Xo... read more

Muse

This is touching. Asking the other soul to give in. Sometimes an open invitation is all that is needed. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you muse. Xo. With any luck, we shall see. ;-)

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Added on July 29, 2013
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Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS

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I am always writing, but have not joined a writers' group since The Belle Haven when it was in existence. I loved it and really miss it. So when this site was recommended to me, I couldn't resist. .. more..