Did I Make You Feel?

Release.

 

08/20/13

 

Did I make you feel?

Something besides sex?

Glad to be a woman?

Proud to be who you are?

 

Did I make you feel

Loved?  Beautiful?

Charming?  Desired?

Hopeful?  Moved?

 

Did I create

Sentiment in you

That simply was not there

Before?

 

Did I make you feel?

Good?  Sexy?

Fabulous?  Good at what you do?

And how?

 

Did I make you feel

 

Real?

 

Do I make you feel

Even now?

 

You make me feel.

 

Is that wrong?

 

 

Author's Note

Art: "End Of The Road" by Blakk Reign, 2007.

Reviews

[B-poet]

Loved the intriguing questions all throughout your profound poem. It's nice for a man to know that the woman he's involved with makes him feel appreciative for being his true self. The same principle applies to all women as well. Great work Melobldnfr. A riveting read. :)

[Melobldnfr]

Thank you Bpoet for visiting and reviewing. It's much appreciated, and I am glad it's resonated with you.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Not wrong at all..............excellent write. Oh to feel, to feel again .............something good. That would be awesome

[Melobldnfr]

Wouldn't it, though?

[Earthie]

That was really good, It reminds me of my Ex.

[Melobldnfr]

Thank you. I appreciate it very much.

[Lily Mae]

Gosh, if your words were spoken by everyone we would all know uncondional love and peace:)....xo. This allowed me to feel and reminded me I need to apply that into all of my relationships... Love it!

[Melobldnfr]

Lily, how I do wish that could be so! Xo. Yet, I've not actually spoken these words. A part of me of course wants to, but I am hesitant. I don't know that doing so would bring any answers, or that the answers would make any difference other than filling in the blanks. Xo.