Uncertain Arrow

My aim is at some perspective.

04/16/14

You're not alone in feeling vulnerable and exposed...

Not rejected, but of a string

Tied to the fletching of an uncertain arrow.

The rub of the bark:  a soft dream shared,

But at the same time,

Feelings spared?

No knots, yet no unraveling,

And no more burning of a crashing kind.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've said it before Mel, but you deserve much more attention here than you get...I think you should start promoting your works a little more...the title image is truly unique, and the emotion behind all of it is so real. I think that's your strength as a poet...you kind of work the opposite way in terms of how a poet works...many of us start with images, and from there we attempt to mold them into emotions...I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure you start with distinct emotions and feelings that you wish to get across, and your images are borne of those emotions. Whatever your formula may be, it works. Great work as always my dear friend. xo

[Melobldnfr]

I don't know how you do it Steve, but as I've said, you read me so well and true. Pretty much how I do it, yes. I must say I don't know the ways of others. As for promoting...I don't know. I'll have give that a think. Thanks.