I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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I do, I do

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11/13/15


I see them there

Propped in a chair

Connected to you

And try not to stare


I wonder if you know,

Ever fathom, or sometimes guess

I'm proverbially sitting on my hands

And wrestle with this want to show you tenderness


Perhaps selfishly, yes

As I want to rub your feet

As much for you

As the effect it would have on me


And last night

My imagining you

Holding my unfolded palm

Kept me from smoking on the way home


I don't just find you sexy, Love


I find you somewhere in my soul

© 2015 Melobldnfr


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"I don't just find you sexy, Love
I find you somewhere in my soul.." These few shots of lines're enough to remove your all "Wondering", I guess. Kinda philosophical poetry it is but not less than any powerful content...that's well written with real nice feelings of your very heart.


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Wnderful! And those last two lines...deeply rich and penetrating :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I don't just find you sexy, Love
I find you somewhere in my soul.." These few shots of lines're enough to remove your all "Wondering", I guess. Kinda philosophical poetry it is but not less than any powerful content...that's well written with real nice feelings of your very heart.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

10 Years Ago

Thank you Adams for your time, consideration, and your review acknowleging these are indeed words fr.. read more

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Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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I am always writing, but have not joined a writers' group since The Belle Haven when it was in existence. I loved it and really miss it. So when this site was recommended to me, I couldn't resist. .. more..