Angels,Demons, Tears Appear

A Poem by Melody

Wrote this a long time ago too...Of course. Read it and tell me what you think please?

Angels,
Demons,
Tears appear.
Appear in the young girl's sorrow from the drained energy,
All she wants is her dignity.
She doesn't want your pity.

Angels come down to clear her soul,
Demons despise the angelic creatures and dominate the girl's mind.
Demons attack,
Angels will cry.
When they find out they've been despised.

The girl's mind was lost in battle,
Her soul was saved,
On it's last breath.
Let her take her timid breath of this new fresh air,
Angels,
Demons,
Tears will appear.