The World Is

New piece. Please read

Shaking
Shaming
Screaming.

Crying
Crowing
Crawling.

Prowling
Probing
Proving.

Thinking
Thanking
Thriving.

Living
Loving
and
Lying.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Mitch]

Each word brings a flash of a different scene that is a collage of a life. Its crazy how in reality we can go from one state to another and really experience "Shaking, Shaming, Screaming" that quickly. I think this was an interesting approach and a reader can receive this in so many ways.

[Melody]

Thank you so much! :)

[Sam Gregory]

Simple but quite powerful, strikes hard and resonates with me. The alliteration is good here too, can be related to by many me thinks

[Melody]

Thanks, Sammers!

[Sam Gregory]

Anytime, I realise im replying to this years later. On here again coz im gonna try write more stuff

[James Glazier]

Hauntingly accurate depiction of our world, brilliant poem.

[Melody]

Thank you! :)