Two sides

Words

That's all they ever are

No wonder you distrust them

Where they let you down

They allowed me to survive

I owe these words my life

And you your disappointment

Reviews

[JT Godin]

Ah! Two things I like in a poem! Brevity and themes of words being words. Bravo!

Something which I like specifically; in the last sentence, the "you your" word order. I feel like doing this, or things similar to this, add tension. Tension is good.

[Meraki]

Thank you!