Waiting

I sat, waiting

waiting for you.

but maybe

just maybe

you'll finally answer my cries.

But since I was waiting here for too long, 

I missed that you died.

So I sat longer,

lost deep in my mind,

I feel so confined

how can I escape this lonely oblivion

that you now call home?

Author's Note

I am not very good at poetry but I sure try! :D

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

last line I read as "that"---
this is pretty straightforward, but quite expressive...

reminds me of how much i miss my folks....

j.

[Rose]

Oops! I better change that! Thank you though! And all we can really do is keep them close to our hearts. Much love to you!