Luna

A Poem by Isabel

Written Feb 18, 2014.

I'm held by a beam of liquid silver

And it grazes every shadow of my face.

I'm lifted by the night towards Heaven.

I didn't know I was to be forgiven.

I lay on cold ground and it sends a shiver.

It's beauty in the form of light and there is no trace.

© 2015 Isabel

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Robert

Very good word choice throughout this piece. very vivid with the words selected. I truly like the last line Maria. Good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannette Lunete

The moon is a nice accomplice to share the route with. I love the imagery. Keep it up! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Isabel | 24 | SoCal | Temporary Poet | I've got a fiery passion for all things creative and unique 🌠 tumblr @mercurymood twitter @bebecita_bel instagram @bebecita_bel more..