My Piece Of The Wild

This poem describes two opposites one wild ,and the other mild who are actually allot alike.

You have been born a wild child

and I have born a mild child 

So in realty ,We cannot see

This relationship clearly

Polar opposites we are

Your wild

and yes im mild

But we share the same ring
From our upbringing

My Dad had chosen to be frozen

And yours had done the same. 

I may be mild , but You forever are my piece of the wild.

Author's Note

I wrote this about a year ago.

Reviews

[Eric]

*A lot is two words.
The poems meaning and intention speaks to me of a poignant piece missing from me - that I want and need.
However it's voice is not articulate nor poetic to my ear. "so in reality we cannot see the relationship clearly" ? and what does dad have to do with it?

[Shaquana Adams]

I love this. The way I read it makes it relate to me. Very nicely penned! :)
-QuanaWana