What If? -Verse Two-

What if the stars stopped shining,

I might stop shining too.

 

What if the sun stopped rising,

I could take the blame.

 

What if the moon disappeared,

I would go away.

 

Would you try to find me?

Reviews

[Angel Veselinov]

This is surprisingly :) nice for me loved it thanks for sharing

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Very interesting thought , the what if's we can never really know ...but poetry helps to ponder

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. We all want to be found and treated with kindness and love. I like the feel and the movement of the poem. You wrote a complete story in so few words. That takes a lot of talent. A excellent poem.
Coyote