When You Fear Death

I wrote this open minded, spiritually with a broken ceiling and took off the blinders for once, and just wrote from my heart & soul, and and let the collective energy of Source do the work.

Didn't take but I would give for a long time / This cold world in my palms I would call mine / found myself awake with some strong signs / line for line I spoke and went beyond rhyme / sent me on time like a present in the moment / Pre-sent as golden child caused a  riot to foment / rolling without movement holding without grasping / the closing of one's choosing stolen from some casting / roles in a movie that plays daily in mind / there is no true way to explain the way we're designed / by that I mean the why? The where? And the how? / the lies, the crowds in lines in awe for the wows / so many scientific facts that were once undefined / that's why I still remain on both sides of the grind / logical spiritual, facts and miracles / doesn't have to be visual, to attract the minimal / micro macro what about intro? Isn't that simple! / we have risen a grim soul through a temple / call ourselves something we may not be / because I KNOW NOTHING is deeper than you and me / put a face on God call him son, the Holy Ghost the father / tell the stories of much healing and walking on water / but these are stories of a guru, mystic the shaman a star person / rewritten over 1000 times by man what's our version? / anything we want? Anything that places fear / in the hearts of so many cowards of death when it is near / 

Author's Note

excuse typo's and grammar, this is lyrics each dash is a bar, like a {rap} but when I write its within 5 minutes time and it just comes all out from the heart and I let the creator do this through me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the honest tone and realistic thoughts. I saw hard people show real face when death was near. Few people are on the right path. We accept less, which is sad. I liked the words shared. This poem would create a long and interesting conversation. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote